-scene in 4th book- bayts are bat/human creatures, similar to vampires,
but they dont look like a dork. they look more bat than human.

the chains make sounds of twinkling chimes,
as the darkness in the cave never knowing the times,
the eyes of the bayts glow red as one approaches,
with the claws on his wings scattering the floor roaches,
rising from the ground while sniffing up her skin,
as his desire is to drink the blood circling within,
she cries as the tears roll down her cheek,
after being chained so tight and long for a week,
the tears roll down her naked body presented as a meal,
as the claws glide along her that she can feel,
his face close to hers as he opens wide,
with the teeth folding out to her skin with a slide,
cutting in with a push to make his mouth cover the holes,
as these bayt creatures suck the life of their victims tortured souls,
keeping them alive with just enough blood to drink,
only bringing her life to the ending brink,
they then give her food of beetles and bugs,
and cover her in smelling rotten pelt rugs,
to die would be easier than serve these vile creatures for years,
as a life of pain and suffering can only be written in tears.

As most of you are aware, I'm writing novels based on a half dragon/demon creature i call NIN. seen in the youtube video i made in second life.

i am finishing my 3rd novel on it, and add people i know as characters into it, some die some live. I don't take other peoples ideas from other books, movies or games where i can. writing it all my own way entirely in poetry/simple english.

I am asking if people can think up some type of animal/human creature and if your not already in the book, ill make it based on you. capturing your personality.

I already have dragons, demons, fairy (crepters), panther (panthomers - simular to battlecat from he-man), dogs (flaming hounds/wolf), rhino/people (argamethasons - based on freemasons), cat/people (panthumans), dragon/people (drumans), demon/fairy, bird/dinosaur (biraptors), giant spiders (spidels) , evolving people (evolvers - they grow gills and flippers to swim) and various types of people with magic based on elements needed first, like need a spark to cast a fire spell and spit in your hand to cast a water spell. this is adding to my original idea of just a demon back in the early 90's to now a part dragon/demon making it a dreamon, also basing it in a medieval land but without the cruddy "sire" speaking pole up ass times. lots of sarcasm, and people have all unique personalities, i have 180 characters set for my 4th book. so if anyone can think up another race?

ill take all suggestions on board