29 July 2014

2nd books beginning has been rewritten to fit in with the style of the 1st.
some reason i made the sentences longer in the 2nd book, but still rhymed them all. this made it seem like it didn't rhyme then forced to rhyme at the end of the sentence.

Dreamons.
Through the snow and wind of the mountains steep ledge,
Seren climbs onto her dark horse, looking over the edge,
Coldly winds sweep through her hardened iced hair,
As an exhale of her breathe swirls in the cold air,
Riding away from this deserted altar ruins of stone,
Moving forth and down between the ancient rows of bone.